There’s something about music it lets pain breathe in a way words alone can’t. This one carried both the wound and the beauty of still wanting to believe. ✨
You’ve really captured how love is half-truth, half-pretend, and yet wholly felt. It reads like a song about hope and heartbreak at the same time, beautiful work from you two! 🙌👏👏
What a a hauntingly beautiful write, this is absolutely stunning. I have subscribed for more
Thank you Aaliya and thank you for subscribing.
There's more on the way for sure. 😊🙂↕️
Just beautiful! You’re both so very talented 💜
You’re too kind! This is the first melody I’ve ever written in my life, so not sure yet if it’s a talent or a fluke 😅
That’s amazing truly! It was beautiful!
Aww, thank you so much!
You're too kind Liora. 😊🙂↕️
Lol, you deserve it and so much more! 💜
Wow - the emotions are palpable! Great lyrics, amazing voice and interpretation ❤️
Thank you so very much, Gabriela! You are too kind!!
Thank you so much! I'm happy to know you liked it Gabriela!
Jewel sure knows how to bring those emotions to life and I was so lucky to work with her. 😊🙂↕️
Aww thank you Carlos. I just have a lot of big feelings 😅
Guys, so good. So. Good. I loved the idea of turning a poem into a song, and this has inspired me finally try it out myself, too!
Jewel, I can’t believe this is your first time doing something like this!!!!
Thank you SO much Sol!!! I can’t wait to hear what you come up with!
Sol I'm looking forward to yours now!
Thank you for being so kind. 😊🙂↕️
Omg this is so good! How come you are all so talented 🥹
Oh Lisha, you're too kind, thank you so much for your words.
I'm really lucky to have met some really talented friends here. 😊
And you're incredibly talented yourself so your comment is quite an honor. 😁
Also thank you!! 🥹
Uhhh… you are one to talk, you made a perfect moon out of a picture frame and spackle!! 🌖 not to mention your writing is freaking amazing!
There’s something about music it lets pain breathe in a way words alone can’t. This one carried both the wound and the beauty of still wanting to believe. ✨
Thank you for reading and listening to the song. 😊🙂↕️
It is heartbreaking and still hopeful isn't it? 😅
Absolutely ✨
We always need to keep hope alive.
OMG thank you so much for this comment!!! It means so much that you would listen!! 💕
Some songs don’t just echo — they exhale.
This one breathes honesty, ache, and hope in every line.
You’ve captured that liminal space between wanting to hold on and learning to let go.
And Jewel’s voice — my goodness — it doesn’t just sing it, she feels it.
Thank you both for turning heartbreak into something that can be heard and held.
Jewel really breathed life into these lyrics, I feel very fortunate that we were able to collaborate in this. 😊
Thank you for your beautiful comment Anna, you’re always so kind. 😊🙂↕️
OMG THANK YOU Anna!! 🥹 this means so much!! 🙏🏻 💕
Bloody hell that was so cool.
Haunting in parts. Could just imagine the backing music too!
Omg thank you so much Fred! I’m so happy to hear that, haunting was definitely what I was going for. 🙏🏻
Carlos gave me such great lyrics to work with!
Really happy with your reaction Fred!
Jewel really gave a whole new dimension to the song beyond what my words could have done. 😊
Nice job youse two (Italian accent).
Lol, grazie Sal! 😂
Fuhgeddaboutit! You stole the ribbon and sold it back to the race!
I did what now? What ribbon? 😂🤣
You’ve really captured how love is half-truth, half-pretend, and yet wholly felt. It reads like a song about hope and heartbreak at the same time, beautiful work from you two! 🙌👏👏
Oh thanks for your comment Anne Marie! Love is a cocktail of perceptions and emotions, isn’t it?
Love how you got the hope and heartbreak at the same time. 😊
Beautiful! I loved it
Thank you so much Javier!
It was a new experience but I'm happy to have talented friends to collaborate with.