Short Sentences

[rosenkavalier]

I tore the walls down and you brought new bricks. Yah. That's good!!!

[Carlos M.]

Thank you for reading and thank you for your comment! 😊

[imarkanx || istvan markan 🍁]

Poems focused like the sun through a magnifying glass.

[Carlos M.]

Short but sharp! 😁

[Marlana aka Outtamydamnmind]

I love how each short sentence lands like its own little punch there’s rhythm and weight in the pauses, and I found myself reading slower just to feel each one. Really resonates.✨

[Carlos M.]

Thanks!

I really like the challenge of condensing something that could tell a story in a few lines. More often than not these little poems reveal a poem within the reader more than a story about myself. 😊

[Marlana aka Outtamydamnmind]

I think it’s brilliant work. The impact such little words have is iconic 🔥

[Carlos M.]

Thank you. 😊🙂‍↕️

[Rebecca Watson (ReBe)]

I felt every single one of these..

[Carlos M.]

Aww. 🫂