This is so beautiful 🥹 even though it rhymes 🤣 it's got that lovely musical rythm and the metaphors and vulnerability are on point. The stanza about no longer finding shame in tears and self hatred being reduced to dust, was my favorite. Love should do all of those things.
Yes! I wanted that stanza to feel like the culmination because nearly everything else feels more romantic, which is fine, but I also wanted to show that transformational effect of love. 😁
Oh I loved this one Carlos. Longer sentences in it. Very neatly written. Words rolled off my tongue nicely as I read it out loud. Had a lovely rhythm to it. Beautiful metaphors. Thank you 🥰
So I can’t help but remember my absurdity of love….we all fall into that trap willingly and knowing the consequences….and we love it! 😁
We love it! We're making s'mores and everything! 😁
This is so beautiful 🥹 even though it rhymes 🤣 it's got that lovely musical rythm and the metaphors and vulnerability are on point. The stanza about no longer finding shame in tears and self hatred being reduced to dust, was my favorite. Love should do all of those things.
Yes! I wanted that stanza to feel like the culmination because nearly everything else feels more romantic, which is fine, but I also wanted to show that transformational effect of love. 😁
It was very effective! Not just romantic and flowery but realistic feels too!
Oh I loved this one Carlos. Longer sentences in it. Very neatly written. Words rolled off my tongue nicely as I read it out loud. Had a lovely rhythm to it. Beautiful metaphors. Thank you 🥰
Thank you Klar!
I wanted to bring something more romantic for the weekend. 😊
I'm happy to know you liked it. 😁