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I love how you capture the full spectrum here the playful, the tender, the aching, the soul-staying. It’s like every kiss carries its own weight, its own story, and you make the reader feel it on skin and in heart. By the end, I’m not just reading kisses I’m carrying them too. ✨

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Wow. Is it hot in here or what? Very evocative. It is a slow sensual unraveling and buildup without over explaining, and lots of room to stir memories from the reader/listener as they absorb the words. Your good.

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