I love how you capture the full spectrum here the playful, the tender, the aching, the soul-staying. Itβs like every kiss carries its own weight, its own story, and you make the reader feel it on skin and in heart. By the end, Iβm not just reading kisses Iβm carrying them too. β¨
Wow. Is it hot in here or what? Very evocative. It is a slow sensual unraveling and buildup without over explaining, and lots of room to stir memories from the reader/listener as they absorb the words. Your good.
Amazing! Escalating kisses are really the best kind! My favorite are the kind that steal my breath and turn my mind off. That was also an amazing narration! She sounds so professional π
I love how you capture the full spectrum here the playful, the tender, the aching, the soul-staying. Itβs like every kiss carries its own weight, its own story, and you make the reader feel it on skin and in heart. By the end, Iβm not just reading kisses Iβm carrying them too. β¨
That's the magic of kisses, isn't it?
They can mean so much. Depending on who's kissing and being kissed, where are you being kissed and so much more.
Thanks like always for reading and commenting. ππββοΈ
Wow. Is it hot in here or what? Very evocative. It is a slow sensual unraveling and buildup without over explaining, and lots of room to stir memories from the reader/listener as they absorb the words. Your good.
Thank you Istvan!
Slow is what I was going for precisely. I wanted to give each kiss their time to shine π
Iβll give you that, Carlosβ¦.your sensual imagination is rather impressiveβ¦β¦well done!!! ππ
Hahaha, I was just trying to capture as broad as spectrum of what kissing can mean... couldn't leave the sensual out π
Oh my. Thank you. I needed those kisses this morning. π
Haha, well there's nothing like a good morning kiss, is there? π
A stunning piece β¨οΈ π
Thanks! And it was a stunning read too π
Wonderfully read!
I loved it! The repetition, itβs really evocative too. Haha congrats π
Thank you Izabella! I appreciate your comment and I'm glad you liked it. ππββοΈ
Beautiful and what a vibe-filled piece! Gorgeous in every way! ππ₯
Thank you so much Alex.
I'm happy to know you liked it. π
The escalation here was lovely. Well done.
Thank you Hew!
The key was the escalation, I'm glad it worked. ππββοΈ
Now l think of kissingβ¦
enjoyed readingπ
Haha, thanks for reading and I'd say thinking of kissing is appropriate after reading this π
Amazing! Escalating kisses are really the best kind! My favorite are the kind that steal my breath and turn my mind off. That was also an amazing narration! She sounds so professional π
Escalating kisses sure are the best, and as for the narration, maybe this is why she sounds so professional:
https://substack.com/@klarnett/note/c-145049775?utm_source=notes-share-action&r=5f1tdw