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Marlana's avatar

I love how you capture the full spectrum here the playful, the tender, the aching, the soul-staying. It’s like every kiss carries its own weight, its own story, and you make the reader feel it on skin and in heart. By the end, I’m not just reading kisses I’m carrying them too. ✨

Carlos M.'s avatar

That's the magic of kisses, isn't it?

They can mean so much. Depending on who's kissing and being kissed, where are you being kissed and so much more.

Thanks like always for reading and commenting. πŸ˜ŠπŸ™‚β€β†•οΈ

imarkanx || istvan markan 🍁's avatar

Wow. Is it hot in here or what? Very evocative. It is a slow sensual unraveling and buildup without over explaining, and lots of room to stir memories from the reader/listener as they absorb the words. Your good.

Carlos M.'s avatar

Thank you Istvan!

Slow is what I was going for precisely. I wanted to give each kiss their time to shine 😁

Anne Marie Coleman's avatar

I’ll give you that, Carlos….your sensual imagination is rather impressive……well done!!! πŸ‘πŸ˜‚

Carlos M.'s avatar

Hahaha, I was just trying to capture as broad as spectrum of what kissing can mean... couldn't leave the sensual out 😁

Bougie Hippie's avatar

Oh my. Thank you. I needed those kisses this morning. πŸ’‹

Carlos M.'s avatar

Haha, well there's nothing like a good morning kiss, is there? πŸ˜‰

Darkly Dreaming Klar Nett's avatar

A stunning piece ✨️ 😍

Carlos M.'s avatar

Thanks! And it was a stunning read too 😁

imarkanx || istvan markan 🍁's avatar

Wonderfully read!

Izabella πŸ’Œ's avatar

I loved it! The repetition, it’s really evocative too. Haha congrats πŸ’‹

Carlos M.'s avatar

Thank you Izabella! I appreciate your comment and I'm glad you liked it. πŸ˜ŠπŸ™‚β€β†•οΈ

Alex Cosgrove's avatar

Beautiful and what a vibe-filled piece! Gorgeous in every way! πŸ†πŸ”₯

Carlos M.'s avatar

Thank you so much Alex.

I'm happy to know you liked it. 😊

HEW(Hue) of Poetry's avatar

The escalation here was lovely. Well done.

Carlos M.'s avatar

Thank you Hew!

The key was the escalation, I'm glad it worked. πŸ˜ŠπŸ™‚β€β†•οΈ

Distant Dreams Poetry's avatar

Now l think of kissing…

enjoyed readingπŸ‘Œ

Carlos M.'s avatar

Haha, thanks for reading and I'd say thinking of kissing is appropriate after reading this πŸ˜…

Ashes Of Love Poetry πŸ”₯'s avatar

Amazing! Escalating kisses are really the best kind! My favorite are the kind that steal my breath and turn my mind off. That was also an amazing narration! She sounds so professional 😍

Carlos M.'s avatar

Escalating kisses sure are the best, and as for the narration, maybe this is why she sounds so professional:

https://substack.com/@klarnett/note/c-145049775?utm_source=notes-share-action&r=5f1tdw