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Ashes Of Love Poetry's avatar

This is beautiful. It has a steady lyrical flow that's so satisfying. My favorite lines are the ones about art and heart and being coessential. I also like the little blurb in the before and after the poem. You've clearly got formatting here down and I'm jealous.

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Carlos Morales's avatar

No don't be jealous! I can share all the tricks!

And thank you for the beautiful comment 🥹

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Anne Marie Coleman's avatar

Beautifully woven, your words move across senses the way music moves through air. Well done!

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Carlos Morales's avatar

Thank you Anne Marie! Going by your comment, I succeeded in my mission. 😊

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Anne Marie Coleman's avatar

You did!😁

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Valle Sy's avatar

Thanks, Carlos, for including me in your creative process!

I really enjoyed collaborating to create the art around your exquisite poem! It's intimate, musical, and powerful. Love it! ❤️

Also, thank you for the valuable input during the process! 🙌

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Carlos Morales's avatar

Thanks to you for the wonderful art!

I'm really happy with how it turned out. Working with you on the artwork was great and hopefully it won't be the last time! 😊

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Valle Sy's avatar

🙏 Hoping for the same! 😊

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