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Nick Hills's avatar

"Will a kiss make you forget

the pain that comes at night?"

A kiss has really an incredible power. Beautiful poem Carlos, thanks for sharing!

Chanti's avatar

I usually can’t stand love poems. They’re always so syrupy, so mushy. But yours isn’t. It’s the questions. It’s not performing, it’s not a statement, it’s not asking me to just accept it. You’re kissing the wounds, not the features, the mind, the doubts, the ghosts, not eyes or lips.

And that ending doesn’t go big. It just goes plain: I’ll start kissing you today and I’ll never stop. No fireworks. That restraint is the whole reason it works.

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